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Beauty of a rose,
Alas your petals deaden,
Will thou still be loved?
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NightmareChild103 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you liked it :hug:
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PeaceableBird Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Quite short though nice. Definaly a conversation piece.

( Btw; Depending on thee predictument. In which your short poem associated a question. I'll be sure to provide a answer. It would be procession depending on thee predictument)
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, glad you liked it. It is so short because it is a haiku. :)
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PeaceableBird Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Understood & much welcome.
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AERRG Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful ^_^
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much :hug:
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AERRG Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
ur welcome ^_^
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0-SEBASTIAN Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Even more so than before.
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww :)
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Mourning-Star98 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :rose:
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Mourning-Star98 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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crazybean13 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
love this!
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! :hug:
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MadHat11D6 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011   Writer
This is very beautiful. I admire anyone who can write such a good haiku (because that's pretty much my Achilles heel). I like the concept. I've never thought about that before. Admittedly, flowers very rarely cross my mind, but I think the concept goes a little farther than flowers. How you put the words together is also very good (with the words you used and such).
Well done :clap:
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for your kind words :hug:
I have found a new love for haikus, and you're right I tried to symbolize the rose and *hope* it worked :D
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MadHat11D6 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011   Writer
Indeed. And you're welcome. =)
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ArtisticSoldier Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I falls right into place. Nice.
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :hug:
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ArtisticSoldier Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
not a problem.
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myccrets Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It will ALWAYS be loved...

...and did its life's purpose!!!
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x-Vogue-x Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's very true ;)
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