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Vodka in my veins,
Each sip drowns these emotions,
And numbs memories.
Each sip drowns these emotions,
And numbs memories.
Literature
Cupidity
Crush me. Depress my lungs so I can't breathe,
when your familiar voice hits my ear.
This glorious feeling, I know, must leave,
and the thought of that loss I always fear.
Oh, you cause the blood in my veins to rush,
from the sparks you send through my skin like spies.
Am I revealed by the way that I blush,
like the shooting stars echoed in your eyes?
What draws me to you; is it merely lust?
or is it love that binds us together?
Is this something real, something I can trust?
Take my heart to hold, and own no other.
You see, all that I want is everything,
and you are everything to me, darling.
Literature
Rosetta
The ways that my lips and eyes
curve and shine
are a language that whisper my secrets.
I have been decoded
(nothing is sacred).
Your gaze softens mine,
every time every time every time...
I do not appreciate
betraying myself under your
laughing, hazel eyes
and the heat of your torch.
You know me so well and I want you
to make me furious,
to give me the excuse
to let you be the créme de menthe
that cools the fire on my tongue.
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She was the Light
She was the Light
The music that surrounds these lyrics
They don't understand
But I can hear it
I can hear it…
The hidden message
That you can only find
From reading in-between the lines
These broken lines…
That fell apart
When you left her
When you took her heart
When you took her heart…
How could you leave
With the door wide open?
You never believed
She'd have loved you longer
She wrote you letters
In her familiar slant
She kept them all
She could never send them
And she still can't…
And where were you
On the days she cried
She had always known
That you had lied
She never beli
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I'm actually pretty happy with how this poem turned out, would love some feedback. Please note that it is a HAIKU, hence the reason it is short...Hope everyone likes it. 
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You expressed quite a lot of emotion in this haiku.
You did a good job of presenting a not necessarily graceful situation in an eloquent manner. You also hinted at the darker aspects of what the narrator is trying not to remember without directly stating it. Leaving things open for the reader to pick up on like that while still making it clean can take quite a lot of practice, but you did a good job with it here.
All in all, good work!
*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write
! You expressed quite a lot of emotion in this haiku.
You did a good job of presenting a not necessarily graceful situation in an eloquent manner. You also hinted at the darker aspects of what the narrator is trying not to remember without directly stating it. Leaving things open for the reader to pick up on like that while still making it clean can take quite a lot of practice, but you did a good job with it here. All in all, good work!
*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write